Hydre
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Post by Hydre on Oct 15, 2014 21:29:39 GMT
Quick reminder that I'm not dead, I've been busy with college and whatnot. Now this is the shape I've gone with  Forum background kind of fucks this up but whatevs, you get the idea. Is this about the shape you're okay with? The glass is transparent btw, you can't see it here |
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Post by Hate9 on Oct 15, 2014 22:19:46 GMT
I like it. It's obviously going to need shading at some point, but as you said, it's just a shape.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 18, 2014 0:04:37 GMT
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Post by Hate9 on Oct 18, 2014 1:41:21 GMT
Okay, now THAT is NICE!
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 18, 2014 2:17:16 GMT
Here's an explanation for that thing behind the tube. (Drew this on my phone.)  PS.I need to see about the console if null has a separate console in mind or what. PS2.This is nowhere close to complete yet. Needs more work since 48x can make it super shiny. |
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Post by Hate9 on Oct 18, 2014 2:28:25 GMT
May I suggest a transparent background for the fluid part of the tube? It'll make it blend better with other tiles.
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Post by Nullbear on Oct 18, 2014 3:00:09 GMT
Well for the console, You can do whatever. My console plans are only for the cryo right now... If i need to tweak it a bit i can do.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 18, 2014 17:56:25 GMT
And here's the pod with the console attached.   I also tried animating it.  |
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Post by Nullbear on Oct 18, 2014 23:14:37 GMT
I love how you did a sketch detailing the different parts etc
Could you make the silhoutte in the pod a bit darker, and more amorphous?
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 6:33:58 GMT
I hear ya I actually wanted to do something similar since it seems not that much different from the empty tank. I'll make the background darker and animate a little bit of liquid. If that doesn't work I'll darken the silhouette.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 8:21:12 GMT
I worked on the thing I mentioned and here's the progress so far.  I plan to blur that support thingy in the back too I am just too hungry and wanted to see if I am on the right track. PS.I realize that those bubbles make it seem like the persons drowning so I'll do something with that too. |
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Post by Nullbear on Oct 19, 2014 8:23:31 GMT
With the bubbles, Just reduce the frequency of them/quantity of them.
I'm liking it.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 10:34:44 GMT
Here we go.  Less bubbles and blurred out that support thingy in the back. |
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spheretech
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You wanna put banging donk on it.
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Post by spheretech on Oct 19, 2014 12:00:05 GMT
That guys breathing really fast
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Par
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Post by Par on Oct 19, 2014 16:23:15 GMT
Well, this definitely gets better and better. My only gripe with it is the lighting. Any lighting on an object should come from the front, slightly above the object. Shadows should be in the back, and in places where light can't. access. In your picture, the light is on the right.
Other than that, it's great! The detail on it is nice.
A few things I would change: Maybe make the human a bit bigger, and the tube a tiny bit slimmer.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 16:28:44 GMT
Well, this definitely gets better and better. My only gripe with it is the lighting. Any lighting on an object should come from the front, slightly above the object. Shadows should be in the back, and in places where light can't. access. In your picture, the light is on the right. Other than that, it's great! The detail on it is nice. A few things I would change: Maybe make the human a bit bigger, and the tube a tiny bit slimmer. Thank you,very constructive criticism. I will try to change the lightning,slim up the tube and make the silhouette of the person inside a bit bigger. I'll post it here when I am done. Thanks. |
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 18:40:09 GMT
Okay here we go,changed the lightning and slimmed the tube a little bit. I didn't get to making the silhouette bigger didn't have time.  |
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Post by Hate9 on Oct 19, 2014 20:17:41 GMT
Are the sides of the tube supposed to be uneven?
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 19, 2014 20:40:52 GMT
Are the sides of the tube supposed to be uneven? They actually aren't, it's the background of the page making it seem that way,but I do get the point you are making. I fixed it.  |
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Post by Par on Oct 19, 2014 22:04:32 GMT
Whew, sexy. The shading is very sleek. However, I think there is a bit too much contrast: the base is really dark, while the top is too bright. I also believe that the strip of light over the tube could be re-done, as it isn't consistent with the light scheme.
The console looks a lot better, and the tube itself is great. I love the colors as well.
The blue dot at the bottom could be a status light? Like, Gray = empty, Blue = in progress, Green = Done, Red = problem of some sort.
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Post by maxinatorx on Oct 20, 2014 9:01:47 GMT
Yup,you were right contrast was fucked, I worked on that a little bit and changed the lightning on the tube a little bit.  *I also need to go get some of my self esteem back that I lost after seeing Lorathor's stuff. Edit: I thinned out the support thingy for the console a little bit and added some contrast near it.  |
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Post by Hate9 on Oct 20, 2014 12:10:09 GMT
And then there's me with my incredibly simple tiles...
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Hydre
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Post by Hydre on Oct 20, 2014 18:36:54 GMT
And then there's me with my incredibly simple tiles... Don't worry I feel the same way  |
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spheretech
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You wanna put banging donk on it.
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Post by spheretech on Oct 20, 2014 18:41:00 GMT
Don't worry I'm pretty sure all of you/us can do more HD stuff if we put more time into the sprites.
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